Sunday, July 18, 2010

Hack, slash, cut

Very satisfied with final edit of "The Fontane Sisters are Dead" - story tightened up over 500 words, down to just over 7,100, and I still added a few little things right at the end.

Read it to Patricia - she liked it, too, and helped point out something questionable that had crossed my mind, also.

I will probably finish up in a day or two and move on to "The Sanguine Empire".

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